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Dialogue That Reveals Character — Homework

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Dialogue That Reveals Character — Homework

Fix dialogue punctuation, then add real dialogue to your own scene.

  1. 1.Punctuate: Get down now the rider shouted
  2. 2.Punctuate: I heard them coming Eliza whispered they are close
  3. 3.Rewrite as dialogue that shows, not tells: "Eliza's father was proud of her."
  4. 4.Write three lines of dialogue for your own scene, correctly punctuated, that reveal a feeling without naming it.
  5. 5.Check one line: does the comma sit inside the closing quotation mark?
🌲 Homeschool of the FutureFifth Grade · Writing · week 3 homework