Add dialogue to the narrative draft, correctly punctuating quotation marks, commas, and end marks, and starting a new paragraph for each new speaker.
Dialogue is the exact words a person says out loud, and it can make your small moment feel alive. Quotation marks wrap around the exact spoken words, like two hands holding the sentence: "Watch out for the wave!" my sister yelled.
Punctuation rules matter here: a comma (not a period) usually sits inside the closing quotation mark before a tag like "she said," and a new speaker always gets a new paragraph. Getting this right helps a reader follow who is talking without getting confused.
Mastery looks like: They punctuate dialogue correctly (quotation marks, comma or end mark placement, new paragraph per speaker) in their own draft.
Common stumbles: Forgetting to start a new paragraph for each new speaker, or placing the comma or end mark outside the closing quotation mark.
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