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Revise One Story Fully — Homework
Revise your whole story using every tool from this unit.
- 1.Read your whole draft aloud. Which tool feels weakest: hook, stretched middle, dialogue, sensory detail, or ending?
- 2.Revise your hook beginning if it needs it.
- 3.Revise your stretched middle moment if it still feels rushed.
- 4.Revise your ending if it does not yet show a feeling or realization.
- 5.How does your story feel different now compared to your first draft?
🌲 Homeschool of the FutureSecond Grade · Writing · week 34 homework