Add a small amount of dialogue with correct quotation marks to make a story moment feel real, without overusing it.
A little bit of talking can make a story moment feel alive -- but just a sprinkle, not a whole conversation. One or two well-placed lines of dialogue are usually enough.
Remember the punctuation: put quotation marks around the exact words someone said, and use a comma before the quote if a phrase like "she said" comes first.
Mastery looks like: They add one or two lines of dialogue to their story with correct quotation marks and comma placement.
Common stumbles: Forgetting the comma before the quoted words, or adding so much dialogue that it overwhelms the story's action.
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