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Revising for Structure — Homework
Practice structural revision moves, then apply them to your own draft.
- 1.Is fixing a misspelled word revising or editing? Why?
- 2.Cut the redundancy: "The counterclaim is important to address. Addressing the counterclaim matters a lot."
- 3.Rank your three body paragraphs from strongest to weakest and explain your ranking in one sentence.
- 4.Rebuild your weakest paragraph using a full evidence chain: a statistic, a source or example, and a warrant sentence.
- 5.Did you reorder any paragraphs? What effect did the new order have when you read it aloud?
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