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Revise With Mentor Sentences — Homework
Practice imitating sentence patterns, then revise two sentences in your own draft.
- 1.What is the structure pattern in this mentor sentence: "Tired but proud, the team walked off the field."?
- 2.Use that pattern to write a new sentence about your own character.
- 3.Find a mentor sentence in any book you have at home. Copy it exactly and name the book.
- 4.Revise two flat sentences from your own draft by imitating your mentor sentence's pattern.
- 5.Read your two revised sentences aloud. Do they sound stronger than the originals? Why?
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