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Editing for Precise, Persuasive Language — Homework
Edit your full essay for precise language and fix any risky absolute claims.
- 1.Revise this vague sentence: "Screens are not good for kids."
- 2.Revise this risky absolute: "Every single kid gets tired from too much screen time."
- 3.Find two vague words in your own essay draft. What are they?
- 4.Rewrite both sentences containing those vague words with precise language.
- 5.Name one risky absolute word that a persuasive writer should use carefully.
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