Fourth Grade · Writing · week 24

Linking Phrases: Connecting Your Reasons Smoothly

Revise the argument essay by adding linking words and phrases that connect the claim, reasons, and evidence smoothly.

Linking words and phrases act like bridges between ideas in an argument essay: for instance, in addition, consequently, for example, on the other hand, as a result. They help a reader follow how one idea connects to the next, instead of feeling like separate, disconnected sentences.

This week you do a "linking-phrase pass" through your draft, adding bridges especially between a reason and its evidence, and between your reasons and the counterargument paragraph.

📋 For the teacher
Teach it (10–15 min):
  • Keep a short list of linking phrases (for instance, in addition, consequently, for example, on the other hand, as a result) visible while your child revises.
  • Read a paragraph aloud without any linking phrases, then again with one added, and ask which feels smoother and easier to follow.
  • Focus linking phrases on the trickiest transitions: reason to evidence, and reasons to counterargument.
  • Do not force a linking phrase into every single sentence -- a few well-placed ones are more effective than one in every line.
Talk about it:
  • Which linking phrase did you add that made the biggest difference?
  • How does a linking phrase help a reader follow your argument?
  • Where in your essay was a bridge between ideas needed most?

Mastery looks like: They revise their essay by adding linking words and phrases that clearly connect claims, reasons, evidence, and the counterargument.

Common stumbles: Overusing the same linking phrase everywhere, or adding one that does not actually match the logical connection between the two ideas.

See it visually

Interactive, spoken-aloud tools that show this idea in motion.

Essay & Thesis PlannerShape a thesis and outline an intro, body, and conclusion.try →Transition WordsLink ideas with first, however, therefore, and finally.try →Persuasive AppealsBuild an argument with ethos, pathos, and logos.try →
Homework for this lessonType it, write it with a stylus, or print it for pencil & paper.open →
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