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Revision: Add One Scene — Homework
Expand your story's most important moment into a fuller scene.
- 1.Which moment in your story is the most important -- probably your climax?
- 2.What did you see at that exact moment that you left out of your first draft?
- 3.What did you hear or feel at that exact moment that you left out?
- 4.Rewrite that moment as a fuller, slower scene using these new details.
- 5.How does the expanded scene feel different from the thin version?
🌲 Homeschool of the FutureThird Grade · Writing · week 33 homework