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Revision Workshop: From Draft to Final — Homework
Revise your Week 6 draft into a polished final version at or under 650 words.
- 1.Explain the difference between drafting and revision in one or two sentences.
- 2.Identify and cut a throat-clearing opening or a redundant passage from your own draft. Show the before and after.
- 3.Get feedback on your draft from a parent, sibling, or friend using one specific diagnostic question of your own, and record their answer.
- 4.Produce a final, proofread draft of your personal essay at or under 650 words.
- 5.Name one thing in your final draft that is meaningfully better than in your first draft, and explain why.
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