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Concision, Diction, and Finding Your Voice — Homework
Revise the diagnostic essay from Week 1 for concision and voice before completing these items.
- 1.Revise for concision: "At this point in time, we have not yet reached a final decision."
- 2.Rewrite in the active voice: "The window was broken by the storm."
- 3.Explain the difference between diction and voice in one or two sentences.
- 4.Revise one full paragraph from your Week 1 diagnostic essay for concision, cutting at least fifteen percent of its words.
- 5.In three or more sentences, describe one specific habit (a phrase, a rhythm, a kind of joke or observation) that already shows up in your own writing more than once.
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