Tenth Grade · Reading · week 30

Writing the Literary Analysis Essay III: Drafting on Julius Caesar

Draft a complete literary analysis essay on Julius Caesar addressing whether Brutus fits Aristotle's definition of the tragic hero, applying the full framework built across the year.

This year's third and final full literary analysis essay asks you to apply a framework now fully built across three units: Aristotle's tragic-hero vocabulary from Antigone (hamartia, hubris, peripeteia, anagnorisis), the two-scale thinking from Things Fall Apart (a personal flaw colliding with larger forces), and now Brutus's specific case, a man whose hamartia is arguably his idealistic rationalization itself -- his soliloquy's speculative reasoning, and his fatal overconfidence that the crowd would remain loyal to a cause rather than to whoever spoke to them most persuasively.

A genuinely strong thesis here will likely need to grapple with Antony's closing verdict directly, either building on it or pushing back against it with evidence Antony does not mention -- Brutus's misjudgment of the crowd, his questionable strategic decisions at Philippi, or the fact that good intentions did not prevent catastrophic consequences for Rome itself. As with Things Fall Apart, a comparative body paragraph connecting Brutus to Creon or to Okonkwo is a strong option for a student ready to attempt it, since all three are capable, respected figures whose specific, nameable flaw becomes fatal only under a particular kind of pressure.

📋 For the teacher
Teach it (10–15 min):
  • This is the year's most demanding essay prompt so far -- if your student is not ready to build a thesis that directly engages Antony's verdict, a strong, well-supported thesis on Brutus's hamartia alone is still a complete and successful essay.
  • Revisit the Week 8 and Week 24 essays briefly before drafting this one; ask your student what they would change about their process now, having done this three times.
  • Word study/grammar in context: model integrating a short, exact quotation smoothly into an original sentence, with correct punctuation, rather than dropping it in as a standalone sentence of its own.
  • This is the last of the year's three full literary analysis essays; treat this draft, alongside Weeks 8 and 24, as the material your student will choose from and revise into a truly final, polished piece in Week 36 if that is how you choose to structure the year's culminating work.
Talk about it:
  • Of the three tragic figures studied this year, Creon, Okonkwo, and Brutus, whose downfall did you find most moving, and why?
  • Has your understanding of what "hamartia" means gotten more precise over the course of the year? How would you explain it now compared to how you would have in Week 4?
  • What do all three tragic figures' stories suggest, together, about the relationship between a person's greatest strength and their greatest vulnerability?

Mastery looks like: They can draft a full literary analysis essay with a specific, defensible thesis about Brutus's hamartia, engaging directly with the play's own closing judgment and supporting the claim with precisely integrated evidence.

Common stumbles: Restating Antony's eulogy as the essay's own conclusion without adding independent analysis; dropping in a quotation as an unintegrated standalone sentence rather than weaving it into original syntax.

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