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Revising: Read Aloud and Fix One Thing — Homework
Read a piece of your writing aloud and revise one weak or vague word or sentence.
- 1.Read your "favorite book" opinion piece aloud. Which one word or sentence feels weak or vague?
- 2.Revise that one weak word or sentence to make it more specific.
- 3.Revise this vague sentence: "My room is nice."
- 4.What is the difference between revising and editing?
- 5.Find one more vague word anywhere in your writing this week and replace it with a specific one.
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